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Venus Natural Crystal Chair by Tokujin Yoshioka
a student design notebook
BY LAURA SNODERLY
contents
- 2D (5)
- a place to dine + table design (1)
- art and objects: past works (1)
- bus shelter (7)
- bus shelter / shelter bus (1)
- case study (5)
- client work (1)
- Community Garden (1)
- design manifesto (1)
- drawings (1)
- geurrilla marketing (2)
- iar 221 (1)
- inspiration (4)
- installation (3)
- objects (4)
- postcards (1)
- professional practice (9)
- promotional ideas (1)
- reading response (1)
- response: West Side Story (1)
- Rookwood Vase project (3)
- shelter (1)
- shelter bus (6)
- space + table (1)
- spaces (18)
- the hatchery (1)
- wayfinding (2)
- windows (5)
about me
my portfolio
my etsy
pink pigeons of Melbourne
more pink pigeons
something I love
Venus Natural Crystal Chair by Tokujin Yoshioka
7 comments:
I couldn't agree more.
i really like your header with your name and the color you chose as your background really lets your work stand out. i know with mine i need to include more of my personal sketches & work so i would just say the same for you so that it seems more descriptive of you and not just your projects. but i like it!
Hello Laura! I love love love the title picture, but it seems like it is getting washed out with the background of the page being the same color. Also, you may want to think about changing the white text to something that shows up a little better. Having said that, I love the color palette, it really shows your work well.
Laura, first of all, I love your work! I always have. As far as your blog goes, I think its a little hard to see your white letters against the powder blue background. I find myself straining just a little to see what you have written. Other than that, though, nice work! (I like your header)
I love the work you've done with the header so far, and the change in colors, that also go well with your content. The layout is great, with two strong solid columns, along with the sizing of text, and logo emphasis popping out the "about me" section. What concerns me however is related to Katie's post, where the lack of contrast between the white text and the background makes it difficult to read, making that information wash out. Also, some sort of resolve between the sugar image, the white background of the sugar image, and the page background needs to happen, as the stark white box separating the sugar logo from the page background is distracting.
If you want the background of the sugar logo photo (that you load into the header block) to match the gray background color, the hexacode listing for the blog colors is available in the fonts and colors tab. You can search rgb -> cmyk conversion on google, to replicate your background color in photoshop. I do like the changes you've made so far though.
I'm in love with your blog! Great job of showing personality but keeping it professional. Maybe make the header or background a different color so its easier to read, otherwise its all wonderful!
Sugar!! you love white it reflects in all of your designs. I would tone your background color down so you can see the title better. Great organization!
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